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by Elise VanCise
Miners had started to fill the room, their pockets filled
with gold nuggets and ready to spend their new found fortunes. Caroline was
ready to relieve them of it. One man burst with laughter, her husband had
laughed that way. May he rest in hell.
With that thought it was time to get to work. She checked
her bodice and her gun hidden in her skirt, and then walked down the stairs. A
young miner eager for company caught her hand at the landing. “How much for
your time? “
She raised a brow was he referring to her as a … she tilted
her head with a sassy grin. “Sorry, darlin’, you can’t afford me?”
Caroline paused at the bar to pick up a bottle. After a
glance around, she sat near the poker table to watch the players for a few
hands. After the fourth hand played one of the men folded, closed his cards and
gathered what was left of his wealth.
When he vacated the table with the remainder of his cash to
the bar, Caroline smiled as she takes the seat. “Evening boys, mind if I take
some of your money?”
A few laughed heartily as she poured herself a drink and
tossed her ante into the pot. The pot was well stocked with cash and gold bits.
She would be able to move out of his stink hole and into the hotel for a few
days on this kit.
The dealer began the ritualistic shuffle and toss of cards
before he passed them round. Caroline waited until all five were dealt before
she picked them up in her dainty gloved fingers.
The player to her left a well-to-do rancher leaned over with
a grin. “Just match the numbers, honey.”
Caroline closed her cards and held them to breast, with an
innocent expression. “Thank you, for your advice. I’m such a novice at the
game.”
Three hours later….
The dealer called for the final time and Caroline laid a
straight flush across the table top. Two of the men swore and sighed as they
tossed their cards back to the dealer. The third shook his head. “You must have
that beginners luck or somthin, Miss Watson.”
Caroline grinned and reached out to pull the large pot her
way. “Thank you, gentlemen. It’s been a true pleasure meeting your acquaintance
this evening.”
The rancher scoffed and grabbed her wrist. “You’re not
taking my money. This was a con of some sort.” He jerked her sleeve up
searching; the pearl buttons snapped off and tumbled into the cash.
Caroline tried to pull her arm back but his grip was too
tight. “Sir, I assure you, my game has been honest. Or do you question my skill
as to deflect attention from the real cheat?”
“Lady, I don’t know what your scheme is but I know a cheat
when I see one.” He squeezed her wrist tighter just to make his point as the
other men around the table started to question and protest.
Calmly she reached to his far vest pocket with her free
hand. Caroline slipped the ace from her cuff. From the view of the other men
around them, it appeared she pulled the card from his pocket. “So do I, sir. I
think these gents do as well.”
One player grabbed the rancher, another swung, it didn’t
take long before Caroline was forgotten. She plucked the rancher’s hat from the
back of the chair and swept everything from the table with her arm into it.
She’d sort chips and shot glasses from the take later.
Caroline hurried upstairs for her bag and an exit out the
window. It was a new year and time to find another town, she’s been too naughty
here.
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Ohhh naughty naughty! The lady surely needs a spanking! Thanks for sharing your short with us. It was quite entertaining.
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Christine S
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I love it, but yep, she needs to get out of town.
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Loved the post! I can’t wait to read all these new books and meet new authors!!!!!Thanks for the giveaway and can’t wait to see what 2013 brings!!!!!!
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Naughty sells. Thanks for hosting the giveaway.
ReplyDeleteClever twist. She is no lady, methinks :-)
ReplyDeleteWhat a fun short story. Definitely time to move on after that stunt. Thanks for the fun blog hop.
ReplyDeletesbereza22 at gmail.com
Like the short story. Keep writing so I can keep reading. Thanks for being in the blog hop.
ReplyDeleteroya-clan@sbcglobal.net
Love the excerpt! I really like Caroline, and would like to see where she ends up next.
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Hello, Elise,
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for participating in our hop. You're a new author for me - glad to make your acquaintance - and I really liked your story. The illustration is fantastic too.
Stay naughty!
I like clever Caroline.
ReplyDeletebituin76 at hotmail dot com
ooo I so want to read this now
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My mind immediately jumped to, "What happens if he comes after her? Revenge can be...sweet."
ReplyDeleteShe better run fast, she was really naughty :)
ReplyDeletevampiremistress2010(at)gmail(dot)com
thanks for the hop book sounds good
ReplyDeletekaholgate at ymail dot com
Sounds interesting...gonna love to read it! <3
ReplyDeleteOh what a naughty cheat!
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grapeapril75(AT)gmail(DOT)com
Loved the short. THank you
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Caroline has been naughty!
ReplyDeleteI love the name of your blog--Gladiator's Pen. Cool.
catherinelee100 at gmail dot com
Thanks for the giveaway!
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hehe...she was naughty!
ReplyDeleteSo great to be in this fun hop with you,Elise.
donna_michaels @ msn. com
Thank you for participating in our blog hop, Elise! :)
ReplyDelete~Jen
Nice shorty! Love the vintage pic!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the story!
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Great story. Thanks! Best wishes and many blessings!
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I liked the short story, thanks for the giveaway!
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I can't believe after all my fussing at you that I forgot to go back and read your story. Loved it! Especially the misdirection in the beginning (making the reader assume she's a...you know). Very clever. Belated thanks! Meredith
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