Saturday, February 9, 2013

Firsts MFRW Bloghop


      Welcome to Firsts the first blog hop sponsored by Marketing for Romance Writers.org. Here on Gladiator's Pen I have an excerpt from Don't Touch coming to Amazon and Smashwords soon! For the first time Ryan finds an answer to what is happening to her, and she and Detective Jackson Prince meet for the first time. Be sure to leave a comment for your chance to win an ecopy of this book when it's released the first week of March! 

Don't Touch Blurb:
Detective Jackson Prince has to find a serial killer before he strikes again. Reclusive ex forensic pathologist Ryan Reign is the only one who can help him. One problem, she can’t touch without experiencing sometimes frightening visions. Can Jackson find a way to touch her heart so they can stop the killer?  

Excerpt    

        It had been months since she had ventured outside of her lawn. Ryan didn’t understand what was happening to her at first. Since the incident on her last day at work, she has tried to make sense of it. Or at least find out what it was and how to stop it.
            She sat at the computer nursing a cup of cocoa February in Florida was the dead of winter. It would be up in the seventies in another week but right now it was in the forties. Ryan was searching the net for the gazillionth time. VISIONS, VISIONS BY TOUCH, PSYCHIC were the search words she used. The screen blinked and an all too familiar list popped up. Near the bottom of the page was something different. “The Circle.”
            Clicking the link she waited not expecting anything. The site came up and they had all the usual. Tarot, crystals, books, psychic readings. “Usual BS, I could have just gone to Cassadaga for that.”
            Cassadaga fancied themselves the psychic capital. Might be, the entire town was palm readers, mind readers, astrologists, numerologist, you name the psychic brand and there was a store front for it. In the past they have had to block the town off on Friday the thirteenth and Halloween due to all the traffic and weirdness.
            Just as she rolled over to exit the page she saw a flashing box. “Have a question about your gift? No, I have a question about my curse though.”
            She typed in a brief description of her problem. When I touch stuff I see things. Am I crazy? Hitting send with her email, attached Ryan sat back and felt the sting of tears. How much more can she cry? Every day for the last who knows how long now she cried. About to sign off her mailbox blinked.
Hi Ryan,
            My name is Barbara. I have a gift like yours, it is called psychometry. Or object reading. You can see bits of others lives by touching things they touched. Especially when the emotions are strong.
            Ryan blinked psycom-a what? Object reading? Barbara went on to explain the positive and negative hands, one leaves an imprint the other can read it.  She shook her head and clicked reply. “I don’t care how it works. How do I turn it off?” Send. A few minutes later.
            You can’t turn it off. You can learn to control it. Which hand is your positive hand? The one you “see” with. It is usually the hand you write with. Use the opposite one more until you get control of your gift.
            “Get control! I want it gone!” She screamed furious. She hadn’t been able to go anywhere or even touch her sister without some kind of vision haunting her. Angry, she signed off and paced the floor.
           
            They pulled up into the driveway of an old Victorian home on the lake. Not many of these homes lasted through the ages but this one had been kept pristine. The detectives walked up the porch and noticed the furniture was covered in plastic sheets. Maybe the good doctor was gone on holiday, or playing a round of golf.  Thomas knocked on the door. The door opened a crack, he held up his badge. “Good afternoon, I’m Detective Thomas Lord and this is my partner Jackson Prince, is Dr. Reign home?”
            Ryan stepped back and wiped her face then opened the door a bit wider. “I’m Dr. Reign, is there a problem detective?”
            Jackson stepped closer to the door. “Dr. Ryan Reign?”
            Her eyes narrowed a bit. “Yes, Dr. Ryan Reign. Want to see my drivers license, Detective Prince or should I give it to his lordship?”
            Thomas shot Jackson a look then turned back and smiled warmly. “That won’t be necessary, I apologize we were uh… under the impression that…. Well what we’re here for is to ask you about one of the last cases you worked on.”
            She tilted her head a bit and glanced at the folder. “Which case?”
            Thomas opened the folder where she could see. “The murder of Jillian Hilliard.” The men watched as every bit of blood drained from her complexion. Ryan swayed and caught the door to stay upright. Jackson reached a steadying hand and she jumped back away from him.
            “Don’t! Don’t touch me! I’m… I’m sorry I can’t help you.” She slammed the door. Ryan leaned against the oak and slid to the floor sobbing hysterically as the vision she saw that day replayed its self. Only now it was worse she had a name to go with the horror she had to witness.

            Jackson shook his head as Thomas headed down the steps behind him. “I don’t understand, Jack, you were only trying to keep her from falling.”
            “I don’t’ think that was it. Every drop of blood drained from her body when you opened that file. What ever happened to her that day has that lady terrified.”
            That night Jackson couldn’t sleep. He had the sinking feeling this was going to get much worse before it got anywhere at all. 

What happens next? Well, your just going to have to get your copy of Don't Touch and find out. :) Leave a comment for your chance to win a free ecopy of Don't touch when it's re-released! To visit other blogs on this hop you can click on the Firsts Hop button at the top of this post. 

21 comments:

Viola Ryan said...

Interesting idea, not something you see in paranormal very often. Mia Marlowe has a series where the characters have psychometry, but they get it from touching different types of things.Good luck.

Celina K said...

I want to know what happens next!


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Meredith Ellsworth said...

What a great premise--I look forward to reading Don't Touch--and a great cover!

Christine London said...

Congrats on the upcoming "Don't Touch". Much success to you, Elise :)

KayelleAllen said...

Looks wonderful, Elise!

karen cote said...

Just wanted to stop by and say great job everyone. You all have done MFRW so proud!

Elise VanCise said...

Thanks Karen!

Elise VanCise said...

Thank you Kayelle !

Elise VanCise said...

Thanks Christine it's one of my favorite stories

Elise VanCise said...

Thanks Meredith :) It was a blast to write.

Elise VanCise said...

Psychometry fascinates me. I think because we all use some form of it. For a few it's acute, Like poor Ryan.

Jenna Storm said...

Sounds great Elise! I love to read suspense novels with paranormal elements especially psychics.

Wanda Flanagan said...

Sounds like an amazing read will definitely be reading this one.

Patricia Kiyono said...

Sounds like a fascinating story! I'm just a fellow blog hopper, stopping in to say hi. Good luck with your new release!

lynda frazier said...

Sounds like a great story, One I have to read. Thanks for sharing
Lynda

Veronica said...

This sounds intense! Would love to read it!

bn100 said...

Very nice excerpt.

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Marlie Bridges said...

Have to put this on my wishlist!

rolynn anderson said...

The idea we have to deal with the strange skills we are born with is an everywoman theme. I enjoy working with this premise as a writer. Good luck with your venture! Rolynn

Shadow Kohler said...

Sounds like an awesome book! Thanks for sharing! And thanks for the awesome hop and giveaway!
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Sandy Bruney said...

Interesting and original concept. Good luck.