tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5661402579727829624.post5736238687845512814..comments2024-01-24T04:03:10.669-05:00Comments on Gladiator's Pen: Outlaw Born 8 Sunday Weekend Writing Warriors Elisehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12567420139472596391noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5661402579727829624.post-90745200231187107242014-06-27T13:52:12.774-04:002014-06-27T13:52:12.774-04:00Nice tension! Welcome to 8Sunday Warriors!! Nice tension! Welcome to 8Sunday Warriors!! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08920349957061612653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5661402579727829624.post-69230427720213575312014-06-22T17:51:44.721-04:002014-06-22T17:51:44.721-04:00Plunges us right into the action and spares nothin...Plunges us right into the action and spares nothing. Vivid,excellent excerpt.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5661402579727829624.post-35855432396653511492014-06-22T16:16:24.557-04:002014-06-22T16:16:24.557-04:00Hi Elise. We're so glad to have you sign up wi...Hi Elise. We're so glad to have you sign up with Weekend Writing Warriors.<br />Vivid writing and lots of action. I really like the blurb--makes me wonder what happened to make hm change his ways. It must have been horrible.<br /><br />I'm a moderator here at wewriwa. I noticed that your sentences ran over 8. We state 8 sentences to keep it fair for everyone. We count actual sentences, so anything that brings a string of words to a full stop (period, question mark, exclamation point) counts as one sentence. We don't frown on creative punctuation (commas, semicolons etc) if it's needed to express a full idea in a snippet. :-)<br /><br />The best way to get seen is to be seen. If you visit others, they'll generally visit back. :-) <br /><br />We hope to see you again. Have a great week!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5661402579727829624.post-18201323789832759152014-06-22T13:45:45.817-04:002014-06-22T13:45:45.817-04:00Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors. Looking forw...Welcome to Weekend Writing Warriors. Looking forward to another excerpt next week. There's plenty of tension in this snippet. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.com